Thursday, August 15, 2013

Lost Connection Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dial the phone:
No one's home
Write a letter:
Return to sender
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 20 January 2015

elena, this one goes well with Foolishly Bet! one sometimes waits to keep in touch until it is TOO LATE! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - second time i read it i noticed Dail; is that a kind of sheep? or the first name of Roy Rogers wife? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - was it someone who owed you money? ? ? bri :)

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Patricia Grantham 26 August 2013

A nice poem with good rhyme and rhythm. The ways that we use to stay connected has just about vanished or are about to become extinct. We have lost that sense of togetherness. Do not despair there is still Twitter, Facebook, My space, Pintarest, etc. Please read my poem Precious Moments. Enjoyed your write Elena.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2013

Superb! A chain reaction depicted in so few words! The last two lines make us pause and think.

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