Sunday, March 18, 2012

Lost Child At Dawn Comments

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Cutting the final edges
from the form.

Loose change dangles
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Tiana Webb
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Danny Draper 25 March 2012

This is certainly a fine write with tender structure and economy of words, like a series of sighs in growing dispair but rhythmically sustained in equal measure like hope against failing but not foresaken, persistent hope where the real dissipates too easily and fearlessly into the ethereal.

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