Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, September 5, 2014

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Yes window may bring in
With melody to sing
The birds may chirp on branches
To make it beautiful on every inches
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

painful hole in heart leaves....................... anonymo magnifico9 hours ago ...........only memories! ................................ Comment +1 ? Broken Lullabies?10 hours ago Not sure who its about unless its just a remembrance poem but no matter if its personal or not its still very nicely said? Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Love it. Johnny Martinez10 hours ago She may sing again, , language with sweet voice, . great lines Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Kept me interested Angie Keel10 hours ago I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 36 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome maithili roy 2 mins · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Yes window may bring in With melody to sing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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