Monday, December 3, 2007

Lost Chance Comments

Rating: 4.7

It's not that late, but it is winter
And already dark outside
I wander out and looking up
Spy the first star of the evening
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Susan Williams 14 September 2018

You put a smile on my face with those last two lines- -thank y

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Fred Babbin 03 December 2007

And for what did you wish? Or would that be telling?

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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 December 2007

A really complex set of a thoughts concentrated into a very succinct, effective piece! Well done!

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