Thursday, July 7, 2011

Lost, But Found With You Comments

Rating: 4.7

If the ocean were warm - never cold
We would take a boat as in tales of old
With wooden oar to the heart of the sea
So we could get lost – just you and me.
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Leslie Alexis
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Christopher Cariad 20 August 2011

What a beautiful poem!

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Elena Sandu 20 August 2011

What a beautiful love, what a beautiful dream! 'When night comes we’ll cuddle by the fire Blanketed by each others skin' .. sounds so happy.. Thank you for share,10

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 14 August 2011

Then wake in the morning and live again...(I like this line)

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Romeo Della Valle 10 August 2011

These are honest and deep romantic words not coming out from barren lips but from the bottom of your heart! Bravo! A very poignant composition! I love it! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your heart touching writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from Bronx, New York....

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Unwritten Soul 07 August 2011

Leslie, In deep and center of the lake you used to take by boat...It splashing a romantic feelings...like a rainbow behind the clouds it link from your heart to your beloved one... and the song attached here is nothing than a beat of the heart and humming by bird...Wake up from sweet dream? ? but it really speaks by your mind, i can tell that :) _Unwritten Soul

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Endymion . 08 July 2011

The words are simple yet highly intriguing. The poetry leaches romance. It was indeed a great pleasure enjoying the ethereal composition. Keep up the great work.

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Urshula Davis 07 July 2011

I love this! ! ! This is so sweet and lovely and very honest! ! The words were on point and very brave love it! !

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