Looking way down the harbour
The landscape has changed so much
Once a place of beauty
Now a distant memory
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Further down the river Where once were fields so green Now stands a concrete jungle Of cement and steel.......so fine a poem. crying over the lost beauty of nature and depicting the loss created by the so called modern development.... thank u. tony
The Celtic tiger? Anyway your words bring alive the beauty of the Harbour All is not lost Daniel I enjoyed the poem very much
I love the title and the beautiful flow of words that capture the sad truth of a harbour destroyed by the greedy developers, as nature was torn assunder but your memories keep the lost beauty alive!
My children find it hard to visualise how the harbour once looked Apreciate your comments Hazel
A lovely depiction of state of decrepitude of a harbour, which was once beautiful and in its natural environment. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. A heartfelt call for the preservation of natural environment. Thanks for sharing Daniel. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Lovely title, lovely poem, keep up the good work Dan! ! !
This Island invites everyone; for the peace of the land. Nice work.
so nice