Wednesday, July 22, 2020

Lost Battle Comments

Rating: 5.0

My horse is streaking down the plain,
and I am clinging on.
I've got to make it to the fort;
my strength is almost gone.
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Cowboy Ron Williams
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Cowboy Ron Williams 19 August 2020

To the Fabulous Five who have left comments so far, thank you! Positive comments are my life blood.

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Smoky Hoss 27 July 2020

Excellent picture! I think ol' Gus could understand where yer coming' from on this one pard...

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Anjandev Roy 25 July 2020

Brilliant piece.......thanks for sharing....anjandev roy.

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Glen Kappy 23 July 2020

Hey, Cowboy Ron! I’m starting to explore your poems by starting with your latest. I like this one—the mild humor, the way it rolls along without a hitch in the meter or rhyme. -Glen

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Belle Wassermeister 22 July 2020

Wonderful poem! Excellent rhythm and rhyme, and great story! To MyPoemList and a ten!

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Susan Williams 22 July 2020

makes your reader wonder how many unknown people lie out there unburied, undiscovered, unmourned perhaps- - they lived their lives and surely left somebody behind whose life was affected by them... so enjoying reading you! !

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