Lost Battle Poem by Cowboy Ron Williams

Lost Battle

Rating: 5.0


My horse is streaking down the plain,
and I am clinging on.
I've got to make it to the fort;
my strength is almost gone.

I've got an arrow in my back;
I've lost a lot of blood.
Those injuns took me by surprise;
they'd caked themselves with mud!

They never bothered me before;
I've always been their friend.
Perhaps they think I'm someone else,
but I have met my end.

I'll never make it; I can tell;
I can't hold on no more.
Perhaps there 'll be in my next life
more prairies to explore!

Lost Battle
Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 22 July 2020

makes your reader wonder how many unknown people lie out there unburied, undiscovered, unmourned perhaps- - they lived their lives and surely left somebody behind whose life was affected by them... so enjoying reading you! !

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Cowboy Ron Williams 19 August 2020

To the Fabulous Five who have left comments so far, thank you! Positive comments are my life blood.

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Smoky Hoss 27 July 2020

Excellent picture! I think ol' Gus could understand where yer coming' from on this one pard...

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Anjandev Roy 25 July 2020

Brilliant piece.......thanks for sharing....anjandev roy.

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Glen Kappy 23 July 2020

Hey, Cowboy Ron! I’m starting to explore your poems by starting with your latest. I like this one—the mild humor, the way it rolls along without a hitch in the meter or rhyme. -Glen

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Belle Wassermeister 22 July 2020

Wonderful poem! Excellent rhythm and rhyme, and great story! To MyPoemList and a ten!

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