Sunday, October 14, 2018

Lost At Sea: Soul Of A Sole? ... [ Inspired By: ".............Working Title ", By Douglas Scotney; Short; Souls; Fish ] Comments

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Amidst the flotsam, plastic and wood,
I bared my soul as a good fish should.
My eyes stared from one side of my head;
not seeing 'both sides' filled me with dread
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Bri Edwards
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Paul Brookes 20 November 2018

Enjoyable as always There is wisdom hidden in its murky depths so the whale told me as he gossiped with the sprats and spouted fountains.

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Captain Cur 17 October 2018

I think I can relate to spirits lost at sea. Good reprise on Douglas's poem. A Soul of a sole, good one!

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Tom Allport 15 October 2018

A very sad fishy story of a lost sole who has lost his soul and mates amongst the garbage tossed into the sea, yes...by YOU and ME? What did this poor little lost sole do to deserve this? Maybe it was fate and like some he was born with not much on his plate! Destined to become a spirit in the sea, he was always gonna be a spirit in the sea? Wonderfully written Bri...ha ha ha...caught hook line and sinker I thinker!

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Richard Wlodarski 15 October 2018

Bri, maybe it's just me, but I find your poem to be full of humour. Very enjoyable. I really liked it! Douglas' poem appears to be the opposite. To me, it seems serious and philosophical. However, I really liked it as well!

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