Wednesday, August 22, 2018

Lost At Sea Comments

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I am here
I am not lost at sea
Can't you see me?
Look deeper
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 22 August 2018

Yes, protecting yourself can keep you alone and away from those who care. They need to reach for you. Very nice water metaphor.

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Aqua Flower 23 August 2018

We all have our protective mechanisms. I feel when someone knows you and loves you they know how to reach in and break those barriers. Thank you for reading and have a great day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 August 2018

It is a beautiful philosophical poem nicely and touchingly executed. I cite...... Look deeper Layers are covering me as I struggle to get free Thanks for sharing.10

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Aqua Flower 22 August 2018

Thank you. Coming from a very philosophical poet...that is a nice compliment!

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