Lost Angel Comments

jan is that angel n your poem is literal or an allusion (man) as batool described? if so then it wasnt earth where she or he turned to fallen one?

i have read the poem as well as the comments on it, and as i see its theme is about Man as the crown of creation who was created on the image of an angel but he became a fallen angel who yielded his purity to the hands of the devil.the poem traces out this process... regards

themetically superby, but dint get y & how an angel turnd nto a satan stark? the 3rd linefed on honey n milk seems purposless(may be i m wrong) most importnt thing is its conclusion, a bit wayward to me (you better know tht most poems hav a well kintted plot that resolve the climax)   again you asked for a divine light but in the middle verses u already stated that the angle(a divine spirit or light) changed so is there any need to repeat tht.process? ? ?   Jan dear need some hints from your side, may be our humble wit couldnt get the message properly. few lines are well rhymed but couple of end note r quite unsound again i say the theme is vry powerfull and has to be work out in future tnx fa sharing