Thursday, April 28, 2011

Lost And Lost Comments

Rating: 4.5

Red nose, chapped lips,
Aching legs, wet cheeks,
Broken heart, burning throat,
Tearful eyes, till cockcrow.
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TITIKSHA SINGHAL
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Very definite use of adjectives, I'd give you that. Laconic style always attracts me...it's so deep and intense that it evokes the meaning of the poem in readers head. It's surely one of them. Good irony used, 'Screaming silence'. Makes the poem more beautiful. Death never dies...exactly! Last line is a whole sum up! grammar corection, 'Past is all that flashes in the present' I enjoyed reading ur words. Keep it up.

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TITIKSHA SINGHAL

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