Thursday, November 1, 2007

Lost And Lonely..... Must Read! ! ! ! Comments

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My inner sides are twisting,
my heart is losing pace,
my legs are always shaking,
i no longer hold my grace.
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I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel
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jennifer 01 January 2018

absolutley beautiful

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Domanick Schulte 14 May 2017

I feel this everyday and no one even care if I do it or not.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

WOW! I love this one. It has strong emotions and a good steady beat to it and everything. I love how you rhymed the words and everything made sense. Great work. Keep writing! Your a natural.

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wow, i feel the same!

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(red) harley (blue) suici 01 November 2007

nice poem it very sad but...... very good poem Max-suicidal

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lucy . 01 November 2007

woah thats awesome! ! thats exactly the style i wish i could write like seriously goood job! ! ! !

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