My inner sides are twisting,
my heart is losing pace,
my legs are always shaking,
i no longer hold my grace.
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WOW! I love this one. It has strong emotions and a good steady beat to it and everything. I love how you rhymed the words and everything made sense. Great work. Keep writing! Your a natural.
nice poem it very sad but...... very good poem Max-suicidal
woah thats awesome! ! thats exactly the style i wish i could write like seriously goood job! ! ! !
absolutley beautiful