Saturday, June 17, 2017

Lost And Lonely! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey where is that road
That evades me
Where is that track
that leads me back
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Geoffrey Fafard
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John Ahern 17 June 2017

Hi Geoffrey, I totally agree with Roberts comment about your comment. I always read a comment if the poet leaves one. You have the first two lines or maybe more. As for lost, it can cause panic, but not in this instance as described in your poem.

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