Saturday, May 12, 2012

Lost And Found Comments

Rating: 5.0

A consummate liar, unfortunately so
Delusional and devious.-self righteous and more
A believer in fate..of serendipity I concurr
Of prophecy, ethreal, of karmas infer
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Carly Smith
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Rik Bertrand 16 May 2012

the comments berore me say it all, loved the way the verse flowed, i rarely use such large words in my poetry, but your chosen words went well, A million forevers....

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Young Church Poetry 15 May 2012

Beautiful, I love the use of those big words and the flow. Life can be so tough but then its always beautiful, brilliant poem.

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Godfrey Morris 14 May 2012

The rhyming scheme and flow of this poem is immaculate. Good job!

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Godfrey Morris 14 May 2012

The rhyming scheme and flow of this poem is immaculate. Good job!

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Dave Walker 14 May 2012

Really like it, a great poem with a beautiful flow.

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