Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Lost And Found Comments

Rating: 5.0

We walked to the park in the corner
with setting sun throwing crimson hue;
we waited long for this day to come -
a serene welcome just for us two.
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Gautam Sen
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 March 2010

‘…'River spares her love far beyond / but cloud rains her first love back to shrine.'…’ Wow! Aah! ! Ooohing … Dunking dousing emotive metaphor… ‘First Love’ is ‘Stuck-Love’ … Un-mutant... Subsubtle rill … Blot to be blotto … Thanks Sir.....grandiose hoity-toity …I’m…: :) 10+ for dunked rain Ms. Nivedita UK …

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