Saturday, December 23, 2006

Lost And Found Comments

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Dad, you'll always be my herro
You could never amount to zero.
You may not have always been there
But that doesn't mean that you didn't care.
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Hannah Davies
Dad
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Prasanna Kumari 24 December 2006

there is a feeling of love and some pain flowing with the smooth flow of words...nice poem

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Carissa Thiessen 23 December 2006

Nicely done! Sounds like there is a lot of hurt there but also forgiveness. Awesome words. I look forward to reading more!

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