Wednesday, August 19, 2020

Lost Along The Path Of Life Comments

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The silence of sorrow
Haunts every tomorrow
Indecisiveness fills my mind
Some peace trying to find
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Billy Loving
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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 August 2020

Lovely. Keep writing like this and the red sea will be parted and you can transit from Egypt. Just dont fall into the dead sea of pessimism. Good poem.

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