Lost Comments

a wonderful yet sad poem of the feeling's felt when things don't work out? ............well written US

Nobody guilty The broken occur naturally Unintentionally We lost our grip like we are two ships Lost in stormy seas Wind drew destiny Reach different harbour ************************ Take your way If that make u feel better Time will flows like a river And you will forget me later Waves, pull me away Send me to a new land Where i cant make people hurt.... these two stanza are mostly insightful having a deep relation to time, life and lost. As a whole this poem is beautiful and didactic. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Lost in a relationship is heartbreaking as the distance is like a ship on rough seas with no land in sight, you have written such a beautiful and insightful write!

Your kind soul is beautifully reflected in this pensive poem. Another great write!

This is terrific, Soul. I read this several times, and noticed the very last word in the first stanza. I now see it can be from to cant. A reading with this understanding adds a twinge of melancholy. A great work, Soul.

To be lost in a relationship is a terribly sad situation. What to say...What to do....How to fix.....To stay or leave. Another stunning write...10+

I read a couple of the poems you posted here...I really enjoyed them. Well, of course, I must admit some really did strike a chord. The poem is great; is depicts all the feelings one goes through after a break up, and eventually the distance, serenity, acceptance and sacrifice that go along with it. I rated it a 10!

p/s .. As Always! ! ! ..... inconcerns to my last sentance.

Strikes My heart as I flash back in time! Such Sad Poem And So Well Written as you Captured The Feeling To Paper Excellently! ! ! Afraid we've all felt that, but gotta Hope things of such come about for a reason, of better we, just don't know it yet or at the time... Love Your Writings! ! ! ! SO Touching! ! ! ! ! Look Forward To Next! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Great poem, life can be a torturous path but in time all things become apparent.

Lost in stormy seas! ! Thanks for sharing.

Great writing! Glad it is only that and you are happily intact: -)

Good poem my friend. We are all lost at some Point in are lives. And thank you for your kind Words on my poems. Best wishes Dave