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I looked for you at dawn’s new sunrise,
Through sleepy hollows and moss covered trails.
I looked through the pile of long buried sorrows,
Searching yesterday for brighter tomorrows.
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A beautiful poem. The last four lines are really classic! 10/10.
I found the one who was running from the past. The one who saw life through a rainbow's prism. A fallen victim of her own optimism.............ingenious wrought through metaphors, i like last three lines.10+++
Well expressed poem. Second Stanza is a classic. Read mine - Everybody Has Had Somebody - Adeline
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7/24/2025 8:02:40 PM # 1.0.0
My favourite line is A fall victim of her own optimism. You are indeed an artist. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.