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Great imaginary, describes the realm of what life is made!

wonderfully animated abstractions...a lively poem with a fine imagery! ! !

Thinking on your poem like a advice maybe i need be careful with my boat. No darkness no lost in the middle of the sea.

Beautiful Imagery with wonderful ending. Voted 10+++

Portrays anxiety well.

Amazing imagery rhat sweeps the reader along on a journey well worth taking! Beautiful write!

Very song like, there is a sweetness that is not to saccharine, you paint a lovely scene of nature, you might have been lost, but I have found a delight in the journey you took me on. Than you a lot! ! !

Theme which u have chosen, its awesome.. magnificent in nature is ur poem especially selection of diction is bombastic.. lovely poem

wonderfully written..... love it!

That was very lovely!

a lovely poem.don't know the directions no more ray the rest just sins the which left only prayer. good write

beautiful work thank you

your images are really amazing. keep it up: D

The wind negotiate, the fog give applause...nice expression...when darkness empowers you with its arms, the only light you can see is a prayer....Nice write friend

Beautiful poem...misguided, trapped, denied, lack of directions, no ray of hope..only prayer...All the words are beautifully portrayed...Loved reading it.

A day comes when the day comes and all the hurdles black and dusty are swept aside and the light welcomes the dawn and things are again in all visibility. Lofty theme empowered.....

Well, this is a lovely write. kind of nice imagination that can happen in reality.