Monday, January 7, 2013

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night falls, and only dreams remain
Dim dreams of all that might have passed -
Set deep in shadows, thus my soul
Beneath the dying sun is cast
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Valerie Dohren
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Jitesh Shah 05 April 2015

i like this poem and also read my poems

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Patricia Grantham 27 February 2013

Valerie, A really heart rendering poem. I am most appreciative of your famous works. Your poem is titled Lost and I have found it! (smile) . A wonderful write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 29 January 2013

Your poem has a poignant charm which is touching.The write has a musical flow with nice rhyme.THANKS.

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Arron Fowler 21 January 2013

Valerie i have been on poem hunter for three weeks now and in all honesty this is the best poem i have read in the three weeks keep me informed if you have any new poems please.

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Terry M 20 January 2013

Well done Valerie, we have all felt Lost at least once in our life. Keep up the good work and I will be reading your work.

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Joseph Anderson 14 January 2013

Words from your pen seem to take on a deeper glow, a fuller meaning in a some what magical way. Poetically, you are far from a wilted flower. Pure, sure poetry here

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Kelvin Owusu 14 January 2013

this is beautifully sad, and excellent poem

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Mary Forrester 13 January 2013

I love this poem. I could sit and read your poetry all day Valerie.

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Dee Corpolongo 10 January 2013

Oh so beautiful are your words, yet sadness fills the air.....another excellent poem, Val.

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Vivek Tiwari 10 January 2013

Every immense dark of night has a bliss to kiss the morning light! Nice written.

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Maria C. Pires Costa 09 January 2013

Lovely, heartfelt poem wherein some poignant lines are clearly perceptible. The structure is truly balanced. May you find your heart's desire in a haven of love, joy and peace. Beautiful and touching! Best wishes, Maria

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Red O'mara 08 January 2013

Don't they say 'Never too late', Val? Would have to be true for anyone who writes as beautifully as this.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 08 January 2013

a desperate soul already assumed the darkness that steals tomorrow's light, and then it comes to its sense that there is a hope. a beautiful poem..

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Intimate thoughts and frank proposals or admissions of the kind have a unique reviving power that can`t allow things fall apart and so is the case with these petals that can`t fade ever. This a fine Valerie write with an inward eye seeing much for all of us.. It is your January gift for us.. May the winter around there in the UK never dampen your spirits...

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Lyn Paul 08 January 2013

One thing for certain, you are never lost with your beautiful words. Thank you

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Chandra Thiagarajan 07 January 2013

Oh! What a wonderful write is this poem - Lost- ! The poetry is great and fabulous! It touches at the chords of the heart. The last four lines are soulful!

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Valsa George 07 January 2013

This is just amazing Valerie! I love it perhaps more than any of your recent writes! It directly communictes to the heart with the heat of a burning flame! Though it hurts, I still love it! This deserves 10 upon 10

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Heather Wilson 07 January 2013

A beautiful poem Val, I am sure you are not a wilted flower, and will bloom again and again.

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Neela Nath Das 07 January 2013

The central thought is very nice.Not here, not here somewhere else.I feel like so. Loved Val.

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Joshua Fegley 07 January 2013

An awesome poem Valerie. Very well written. You obviously come from an era before the great chat speak epidemic hit. ;)

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