Night falls, and only dreams remain
Dim dreams of all that might have passed -
Set deep in shadows, thus my soul
Beneath the dying sun is cast
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Valerie, A really heart rendering poem. I am most appreciative of your famous works. Your poem is titled Lost and I have found it! (smile) . A wonderful write.
Your poem has a poignant charm which is touching.The write has a musical flow with nice rhyme.THANKS.
Valerie i have been on poem hunter for three weeks now and in all honesty this is the best poem i have read in the three weeks keep me informed if you have any new poems please.
Well done Valerie, we have all felt Lost at least once in our life. Keep up the good work and I will be reading your work.
Words from your pen seem to take on a deeper glow, a fuller meaning in a some what magical way. Poetically, you are far from a wilted flower. Pure, sure poetry here
I love this poem. I could sit and read your poetry all day Valerie.
Oh so beautiful are your words, yet sadness fills the air.....another excellent poem, Val.
Every immense dark of night has a bliss to kiss the morning light! Nice written.
Lovely, heartfelt poem wherein some poignant lines are clearly perceptible. The structure is truly balanced. May you find your heart's desire in a haven of love, joy and peace. Beautiful and touching! Best wishes, Maria
Don't they say 'Never too late', Val? Would have to be true for anyone who writes as beautifully as this.
a desperate soul already assumed the darkness that steals tomorrow's light, and then it comes to its sense that there is a hope. a beautiful poem..
Intimate thoughts and frank proposals or admissions of the kind have a unique reviving power that can`t allow things fall apart and so is the case with these petals that can`t fade ever. This a fine Valerie write with an inward eye seeing much for all of us.. It is your January gift for us.. May the winter around there in the UK never dampen your spirits...
One thing for certain, you are never lost with your beautiful words. Thank you
Oh! What a wonderful write is this poem - Lost- ! The poetry is great and fabulous! It touches at the chords of the heart. The last four lines are soulful!
This is just amazing Valerie! I love it perhaps more than any of your recent writes! It directly communictes to the heart with the heat of a burning flame! Though it hurts, I still love it! This deserves 10 upon 10
A beautiful poem Val, I am sure you are not a wilted flower, and will bloom again and again.
The central thought is very nice.Not here, not here somewhere else.I feel like so. Loved Val.
An awesome poem Valerie. Very well written. You obviously come from an era before the great chat speak epidemic hit. ;)
i like this poem and also read my poems