Wednesday, January 4, 2006

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

hours streaked by
or maybe heartbeats crawled
bone tired my middle ached
felt hollow at your loss
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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***** ********* 04 January 2006

Eila, great poem. I think a few will be able to identify with the sentiment within it. For me, having loved someone for a long time and then lost them again, it is a gamble to love again. You see the heart just is the way you have loved and lived. If you have never experienced it, you won't miss it, there is the downfall of loving I am afraid. A gamble I won't risk again, that is for sure. 10 from certain on that score Tai

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