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Thanks guys it was the first poem I have ever written.

I gave it a NINE. I really liked it. Very dark. Keep writing! ! S

Felt the sadness n pain. Came across well. Well done

I really like this poem a lot. There is a lot of emotion here. A suggestion would be to keep it in the first person form since that is how you start off, and just make sure all of the sentences flow easily. But other than that very good work!