Friday, May 20, 2011

Lost Comments

Rating: 4.0

Once there lived a girl named past,
she believed the world was wonderful.
she enjoyed the singing of birds
and lullaby of wind and smile of flowers.
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Jazib Kamalvi 12 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, precia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 21 November 2017

Beautiful imagination of memories. Keep up

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 24 October 2017

A good attempt dear.

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Chinedu Dike 04 June 2015

Powerfully piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction, in poetic diction. Deplorable situations changes one negatively or positively depending on ones perspective of the situation. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Past is still connected in our refined future. Well done

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Khairul Ahsan 19 April 2014

Past cannot be buried altogether.

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Sara Schwarz 16 April 2014

Longing for the lost innocence of the past... wonderful

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2011

very nice.sweet outpouring of feeling for the girl.liked it.

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