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I lost my mind thanks to u I lost my heart and was afraid to love again I lost so much trust I even lost a brother u will never know how much I lost thank for the insanity u put me through thank for showing me we don't belong thank for choosing her it best thing u helped me with but most of all thank u bitch those are my favourite lines this is very deep and sad. i like it alot your poem has so much to tell seeing that you spoken everything from your heart i placed it into poetry i simply amazing :)

okay...well, i feel pity on u. teenage-love-heartbroken. it really doesn't matter how u wrote it, it's just the story on which m focusing... authentic and yea...it really seems u were in real and true love with him and he considered u as a toy and just played nd threw away . u know, while reading, i was not at all thinkin if any poetic device u hav used or abt ur rhyming scheme or anythin...all i was lost in the pain u suffered after gettin ditched.... i tried to put myself in ur place and thought for a minute how wud i feel if some one wud hav done smt like this to me nd then i re read the poem. blv me...the main work of a poet is to to feel the reader what he/she felt nd i guess u hav done a gr8 job... sometimes it really doesn't matter if u hav jot down some words and they dont rhyme...poetry is also another form of xpressin our feelings which cant be expressed by any other way. u r an independent girl...stiffen up....u dont need him now....take a cool breath and 4get him like a nightmare... nd yea....do not do the mistake of misjudging a person b4 fallin in luv with him.... hope ur life will become jolly soon :)