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i like this one a lot

Nice symbolistic poem. I remark with delight that you have a very suggestive technique by which you express your feelings.Thank you for sharing......10++++++++

Well, one can be easily lost in the beauty of your rhymes.

very nice lines indeed.. I loved your rhymes.. Very fresh., ... with lots of 'sh's'.. nice 10++ regards Shan

fabulous interesting piece...nice rhymes too....

yep a true poem in our lives.

an interesting write from mr kranthi.p. voted10 surya

Good write Kranthi 10s

follow your heart and you will see, just like a fish, it wants to be free. good write, and a point to ponder. a ten

Lost in the crowd, but found the way out at the end. Good.

a true indian situation this...you become a fish in a family pond dance to tunes of others...without whole heartedly getting involved...a rare subject

No good being a big fish in a small pond.