Walls come crashing down
Around me lost in shattered frown
Floor caves in and falls away
From beneath my feet
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wow! ! For long i lost in your fine art LOST... I salute ur emotion if u don't mind. Give us more...10+++
This is a powerfully emotional poem building the atmosphere throughout the poem. Extremely well done. 10 love Karin
Being lost is a terrifying thing, I rememeber loosing my mother in a shopping centre.... It feels like that, your throat ripped with fear, surroundings become unclear...... I have to say i like this poem.