Thursday, August 27, 2009

Lost Comments

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Walls come crashing down
Around me lost in shattered frown
Floor caves in and falls away
From beneath my feet
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Sue Sie
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without a name Face 14 June 2011

Being lost is a terrifying thing, I rememeber loosing my mother in a shopping centre.... It feels like that, your throat ripped with fear, surroundings become unclear...... I have to say i like this poem.

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Rup Pokharel 05 September 2009

wow! ! For long i lost in your fine art LOST... I salute ur emotion if u don't mind. Give us more...10+++

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This is a powerfully emotional poem building the atmosphere throughout the poem. Extremely well done. 10 love Karin

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