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Great poem Dave sometimes we have to get back to basics

sir lovely.....seems that my struggle was underwater your on land, My wish was to attain eternity your to go your home touch wood and lovely, lovely, lovely

Ya know Dave, really, in a deeper fashion than we, most of us, can see, this is a poem about the struggle of what it is to be human; I truly like it, added to my favorites. Write-on!

We all dread becoming old, but it is said that it is a state of mind - well my aging joints tell me otherwise, but in my head I'm still young, albeit wiser than when I was truly young. That is a bonus. Good write Dave.

Keeping fit for as long as we can is the main thing and just doing our best to maintain it.lovely poem with a true meaning.

I hope we all 'find our way back home' through that narrow footpath, that leads man from this to that. Lovely write, short and precise.

really nice. a brilliant write. sorry for long gap.