Monday, April 27, 2009

Lost Comments

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im lost i a world of humans
im lost with a guy i dont know
no one is gonna save me
no one is gonna show
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Emily Beal
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Dom N. Kafley 22 September 2009

nice poem.thank you.

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James Mclain 10 June 2009

you will be helped from the dark room of your mind and find a hand in side your soul one day..you will be tickled by he..to some unknowns...iip

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The Dreamer 09 June 2009

You are cold and hurting lost out in the night wandering and searching for something right Raise you hand and reach out there And you will see you are not lost And people do really care

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Jack Price 01 June 2009

Nice poem Emily, so much for you to look forward to. don't want you to be lost.... nevertheless, please give us more poetry.... J. L.

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Jerry Hughes 01 June 2009

...........a tad self-indulgent, nevetheless well written. Cheers, Jerry

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

truly magnificent..wait il b the one 2 save u! il find u as well! hold ur head up high my friend..u amazing! well done great poem!

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Emily Beal

Emily Beal

new zealand
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