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I am lost
in these alleys
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'All i need is this rhytm divine and lost in the music this heart wolverine' I will go with what Indira Ji said just below the poems are beyond maturity but whatever it reflects your spirit. A maximum from me for this not restrainting spirit.
You are a fine imagist. Your last stanza is profound indeed. Kindest regards, Sandra
some wonderful imagery used in this fine write......artful.....10
touching verses with great imagery, nice simile and metaphors used...well expressed poem.........Thanks
Quite an expressive poem. Kudos, Sarvesh!