Thursday, September 28, 2006

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked along the path, from the hut
Into the large, wild forest
It was a lovely afternoon
As I wandered this way and that
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Susan Williams 14 September 2018

Lost- -the worst feeling to have especially in a dark and twisted wood

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 September 2006

Mystical Write.I like this a lot, Marilyn.Again your strong command IN utelizing vivid imageryhas prevailed....Afine Penning'FJR

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Scarlett Treat 28 September 2006

You are really doing some 'other world' works right now, and they truly give one a shiver or a pause to wonder about a voice unseen. Dark forrest have a way of doing that, and graveyards as well. These, however, are very well done!

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