Monday, July 2, 2007

Lost Comments

Rating: 4.9

The lonely landscape whispers of itself.
Yesterday's shadow overtakes the field.
Lost in such thoughts we wonder what to do?
Bones are not strong enough to turn sunset.
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Anjali Sinha 28 November 2008

Lost yes Lost am I in this amazing sea of words beautiful write ++10 regards anjali

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Mary Naylor 26 October 2008

You've captured that lost feeling through your fragil, yet powerful, imagery!

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premji premji 26 September 2008

some times couple of lines are enough to nourish my soul for years... happy am i...since some of them belong to you...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

10 for this wonderful poem. Nice imagery.

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Subbaraman N V 26 August 2008

Message is indeed appreciable!

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C. P. Sharma 09 June 2008

Like Shelley you have a message for mankind, 'If winter comes, can spring be far behind.'

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Rani Turton 05 May 2008

Everyone will find themselves in this poem. I loved this poem...elegant as usual. Thanks Sandra for the light YOU provide to others.

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Katherine Wiley 03 March 2008

Yes, I have felt lost before, and your poem says it beautifully. Great work. kate

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2008

I am glad i was able to peep here..Sandra, this is beautiful..it shows the beautiful person in you! i love it

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Fatima Ali 19 February 2008

What a perfect poem and what a perfect sense!

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Mary Naylor 21 January 2008

What a hauntingly beautiful poem!

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Emma Johnson 29 November 2007

Worshippers of light and warmth, you and I will always correspond. Sorry for delay in comments. Susie xx.

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Tom J. Mariani 21 November 2007

I keep coming back to re-read this one. While I think there is an infinite nember of dregrees of lost, you poem seem to address them all. I just finished reading Bill Styron's battle with severe depression and his frank discussion of it. I have started Sandra M Gilbert's collection of poems, 'ghost volcano' where she deals with being lost after the sudden death of her husband. From my personal experience of feeling 'lost' your images of the warmth always seeming far away is accurate. I certainly did not have the strenght or the will to move towards the light, even though I knew it was there. I am thankful I was patient enough to wait until the light came to me. Tom

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Daffodil Decarie 17 November 2007

Amazing, I can clearly hear the voice of the speaker. Beautiful work :) Thank you

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Melvina Germain 20 September 2007

Thanks for these beautiful and touching words Sandra. I'am one who lost her way a long time ago and with the patience of others and the Love of God, found my way back to the light. thankyou Sandra for this beautiful writing.--Melvina--

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Bill Grace 12 September 2007

This poem makes me ache with its beauty and wisdom. Bill Grace

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 09 August 2007

I was lost, until I read your poem... all my best CJ

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Ivor Hogg 04 August 2007

A candle in the window glows providing a beacon to guide your way Loved your poem this is poets poetry

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Ted Sheridan 04 August 2007

Thanks, I just recently found my way back on the main road to OZ.

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Will Barber 27 July 2007

To those who have lost the way, our prayers go out. It is difficult to scale the next hill, to see the light that beckons the weary ones home. Those who do not find the path in this life may, I hope, find new life in a merciful home. 'Blessed are the poor in spirit...' - Mt 5: 3

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