Friday, September 22, 2006

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I wish that you could see me cry.
I looked in your eyes and told you lies.
If I could take your hate from deep inside,
I would do it all again to make you mine!
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San Antonio Can! High School
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Geoff Warden 26 September 2006

Marlene: a well written poem about the subject at hand.....Yet I must suggest you stay out of the back pages of my portfol..on PH....as Sir William can testify it is I that own the writes to such emotional misuse...lol........a very well written piece.....G

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