Thursday, October 30, 2008

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yawning sun gets lost
in jigsaw puzzle of cumulus clouds
that float like patches of fluffy cotton-wool
over the hard humpy hillocks
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Bharat Trivedi
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Anjali Sinha 10 November 2008

nice poem with lots of vivid imagery of the sea and beaches and the sea shells-- beautiful --keep writing Bharat +++++10 regards anju

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