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I'm to awake to sleep
to tired to dream
to thoughtless to think
as it may seem
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Very enjoyable and has a nice flow... It sounds very much like one of my poems, it was trully strange while reading it! You might want to correct the word to, when describing to tired, ect, to too.... very good work..... Bonnie
An enjoyable read, Stephanie. It's always nice to come back home where things are familiar. Keep up the good work. Richard
that was great i can really connect to your poem i really liked it hit me up when you write a new one ok
wow! ! you are an amazing writer.... hope to see you write more for us: D
Wonderful write. I love it. Peace out, Lexi Baby
I love your poem, When we have family and friends that' s when we are home!
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7/28/2025 4:34:13 PM # 1.0.0
very cool and intreing ideas all in one poem! keep writing! !