Saturday, April 19, 2008

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

This woman before me
She is looking so sad
Eyes soaked in a longing
For a wish never had
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Zoe Elsworth
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 April 2008

i'm lost for words................bright piece and meaningful.............

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Mikee Corp 19 April 2008

Good poem. I like the line 'so close yet so far' thanks

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