Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Lost Comments

Rating: 4.8

Lost being consumed
Confused not being found
Memories resumed
Without care feeling or frown
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Adam Day
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Fay Slimm 26 September 2008

I like the alliteration and repetition of words you use in this piece Adam, and the positive ending, all goes to make a good readable and rather poignant poem. Well written.

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