Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Lost Comments

Rating: 4.0

In a terrible fog I once lost my way,
Where I had wandered I could not say,
I found a signpost just by a fence,
But I could not read it, the fog was so dense.
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Maryam Khan
fog
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Aarif Ameen 02 April 2009

good work bachay but you must see the word order i feel it was not good bachay ghounchou ghounchou dont mind and keep on writing zahid bachie

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Tsira Goge 04 December 2008

Maryam, Well conceived poems, beautiful.10 - from my Tsira

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Anjali Sinha 01 December 2008

yes like Rehan I too will say intelligent rhyming

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hmmm..... intelligent rhyming

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