Tuesday, November 6, 2007

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost.
In a dark world.
no lights to turn on.
invisible.
...
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Selina Gurgacz
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Alison Cassidy 18 November 2007

The maze is a great metaphor for describing that feeling of helplessness (like trying to hold on to a handful of sand) . The reader feels your angst and the irony of your last line. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Ivan Donn Carswell 12 November 2007

Lina, the philosophical twist in the end shows a powerful introspection! You may, in time, revisit this poem to reduce it to core feelings. But for mow it marks a special place in time. Rgds, Ivan

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Selina Gurgacz

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