Saturday, October 21, 2006

- Lost - Comments

Rating: 3.0

Your wretched broken spirit
Floating in the sea of disarray
Drifting rapt in a dark secret
Streaming baffled life astray
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Kay Barcelon
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charliewei@126.com 06 August 2018

Hi, Kay, nice to read your poems. Pleace drop me a line.

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Marvin Brato 27 October 2013

Meaningful...quite sentimental!

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Ben Gieske 02 February 2008

Full of color merged with the senses and nature's camouflages combined with good choices of action words. Very nice. Strikes to the heart.

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Joshua Fegley 21 October 2006

Lugubrious Kay; I thought of myself and all the other people like myself when I read this. An awesome and morbid poem Kay. Later...Joshua.

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Kay Barcelon

Kay Barcelon

Manila Philippines
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