Sunday, February 19, 2006

Lost Comments

Rating: 2.8

I'm lost on a long twisted road that runs deep through the forest
I start to run
I can't find myself
I dont know what to do
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Elizabeth Song
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Enemacles Redux 20 February 2006

Thats really neat Kristan, i enjoyed the narrititve from begining to end and thougt that the mystery created by the final line was good. The only bit I'm, personally, not keen on is the word Slew.. I thought it made that whole line sound a bit contrved..

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