Thats really neat Kristan, i enjoyed the narrititve from begining to end and thougt that the mystery created by the final line was good. The only bit I'm, personally, not keen on is the word Slew.. I thought it made that whole line sound a bit contrved..
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Thats really neat Kristan, i enjoyed the narrititve from begining to end and thougt that the mystery created by the final line was good. The only bit I'm, personally, not keen on is the word Slew.. I thought it made that whole line sound a bit contrved..