Thursday, January 10, 2019

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am lost
In search of myself
Here and there
I only find the fragments
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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 November 2022

A wonderful poem dear poetess. Loved it

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2019

And I've melted into vacuum, Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. But then take heart, science says vacuum is impossible to reach. And there are things even when divided remain the same, say an infinity. And yet a poetic heart is not ruled by head.

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Bharati Nayak 26 January 2019

Many many thanks Poet Sri Aniruddha Pathak ji for your insightful comment.I like your words that there are things when divided remain the same, like infinity. Yes, a woman's contribution to a family and society is immense and it can not be valued in measurable terms.Still how many people realise this?

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 January 2019

oh no you are BHARAT MATA ALL BOW TO YOU SON FATHER AND HUBBY NOW NATION O POETESS

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2019

Your comment brought me a smile - -Thank you Poet Poet.

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C F 18 January 2019

I am like a piece of land Which I give away By dividing myself But at the end Nothing is left. - this is so unfair, there must be a way for your escape, for you to find and simply enjoy yourself without the demands from others. Your stanza taken in the proper context is very powerful.

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Bharati Nayak 26 January 2019

Thank you Chito Faustino for your thoughtful comment.

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Abhipsa Panda 16 January 2019

A woman is appreciated for her multitasking quality.............and that ultimately becomes her identity......the entire family is dependent on her...she is the backbone of her family..still..doesn't have a particular self identity...she is always addressed as somebody's daughter, wife, sister, mother...............I don't know whether I should appreciate you or thank you for this poem....Really amazing...

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Bharati Nayak 26 January 2019

Thank you Abhipsa Panda for your appreciation.Being from the same cultural background and a woman, you can well feel the emotions addressed in the poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 January 2019

In search of myself! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2019

Lying in different corners you are lost in loneliness and silence but you are more aware about every perception. Days pass giving memory. Time does not wait but roles of life change. From daughter to mother and grandmother to great grandmother the same self manifests new roles of affection. Collecting self is wise. Awakening self give power to self and motivating self towards God is true perspective. An excellent poem is well penned...10

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Rini Shibu 10 January 2019

You have beautifully penned different roles of a person

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

So is our life, though single as a body yet know differently by different persons. A thoughtful poem.10/10

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Kostas Lagos 10 January 2019

The everyday routine can be very frustrating. A little time of rest is helpful. Great poem

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