Monday, June 11, 2018

Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've walked along this rocky ledge,
Amidst the black and ash filled cloud,
There beats my heart, there lives my soul,
Is this my destiny, to just grow old?
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Sarah Persson
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Edmund Strolis 23 June 2018

You are one of the rare poets that improve with each writing. I am amazed and delighted at your grasp of the art. Sarah dear I am so glad to be able to say that your abilities and talent are forever in bloom.....I wonder if you recognize this too. The cadence, the content is as good as anything I have read by anyone and far better than most. S P L E N D I D.....

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Sarah Persson 23 June 2018

Eddie its so good to hear from you. Your comments amaze me and I am so humbled that you enjoy my poetry so much. I'm sure I will be writing for many years to come, there is so much inspiration in this world and comments like yours are inspiring in themselves. Thank you Eddie

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 June 2018

I search for something more to find. I'd fill this empty hole inside. Do I surrender, admit defeat? i have to be strong and stand tall.. i h ve to find myself now......... thank u for your great thoughts. we all have such thoughts. but you penned it and gave it lively expressions.. thank u, tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 June 2018

Lovely poem. Sarah. Quote: If only I could live, not hide My search would take me far and wide... Profound lines, Sarah. Well written.

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Sarah Persson 11 June 2018

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2018

A lovely poem! Liked the fourth stanza most! 10

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Sarah Persson 11 June 2018

Thank you Dr Swain for taking the time to read

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