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The dense darkness invites me.I lost! But I am there in you.Nice composition and feelings well represented.10+++ Thanks for sharing.you may like to read some of my poems.

A nice poetic imagination, Astha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

following the dense sounds. Burning the mistakes, feeling the pain of your voice. Walking alone, but beside you, counting your short steps. Wow you are a rare poet of this kind, modern, highly passionate and skillful at choosing words. Thanks Astha for such a beautiful poem. Sometimes try to be as good a reader as a poet too, please. 10++ for the poem. Subhas