Loss Of Reason Comments

A small poem that carries a great weight...............10

Jim your alliteration is really good here, and with the slow pace the piece feel like a slow fall but gaining momentum to affect the proverbial mountain. The subject is dark but very well imaged. Your usual way with words wins out again.10 + from Fay.

Just enough said and well said at that! 10! Linda

i love the simplicity, yet complexity of this well written piece of art for the soul.