Friday, July 17, 2009

Loss Of My Dad Comments

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I loved my dad with all my heart, He died from cancer
what a horrible start
He starved himself to make sure that no one would have to worry
for sure
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Ency Bearis 17 July 2009

A heartfelt write and I can relate your sentiments with this killer disease... my prayer to your Dad...you did expressed well your emotion in this verses and it is good to get out of your chest...well penned.... (see my poem ' Always ' in top 500 poems, the same sentiment about this disease and let me see if it will touch your heart too, like the others, thanks)

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