I thank the loss of my memory
Of those days when I had not a friend
I am thankful to the memory
Of those great moments when we are together
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The hounding memory is always difficult to continue. The poem is nice.
You're fortunate to be in control of yourself. Why indeed should we choose to remember the bad times when we can choose to dwell on the good times. I like this poem. Perfect 10!
I loved the pattern that you followed throughout the poem. You spoke from experiences and from the heart. Great job! I gave it a 10.
I love this peom because it reminds me of my father who past away 3 years ago and my step dad died 2 years ago
Being frank enough with emotions. Thank you