Sunday, February 8, 2015

Loss Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

The nerves of my heart are laden
For the mistakes I did
I weep everyday, forsaken by sleep
I am unable to open my eyes into reality
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sakshi digvijay
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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2015

Maybe there was not enough nurturing for the steady blossoming of the love. Otherwise, love is whimsical and temperamental, it comes unannounced and leaves without warning. I like the articulation and penning of the poem. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 08 February 2015

lovely and nice poem

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