Monday, April 13, 2009

Loss Of Life......... Comments

Rating: 4.0

When the faith is lost in the heaven
Then the peace will become an enemy in our soul
When the love is lost in our heart
Then the nature of behavior become full of sins
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Sandra Martyres 14 April 2009

Quite an insightful poem...you may like to avoid excessive use of the definite article to make it read better...thought provoking all the same

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Seema Chowdhury 14 April 2009

a 10+ it is such a wonderful thought. just the kind of poem i would love to read and write. thanks alot for sharing this lovely and inspirational piece of art with all. God bless you. take care

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Chitra - 14 April 2009

profound and definitely highly meaningful...lets not loose the essence of prayer

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so simple, yet insightful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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